That was far better than the majority of english spoken comedies, keep it up!

So much distortion! Nice animation though.

Great ideas!

Hi desune, sweet track.

If any genre would fit this track it would probably be trance as the elements of a great trance track are all here. What just needs a tune up is the general mastering of this track in general. I can hear the layering of the synth, piano, and kick but it seems your levels are a little out and because of this the kick is being left out of the mix slightly. Try work on the sound levels for a more balanced sound, compression helps here.

Your melodic sense is fantastic as I can hear in the melodies in this track, but the breakdowns and clear transitions from idea to idea needs to be re-enforced more clearly as the build-ups and breakdowns that characterize modern trance music do.

The structure of this track is well outlined and executed and your layering of sounds is good, I hope to hear more from you in the future.